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teddymarvelle
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since 2007-08-26
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california usa

0 posted 2007-08-28 02:24 AM



now our love is dead and my heart feeds the ground

so goodbye you said i guess i'll see you around

and you made me blue when you said goodbye

and pictures of you can still make me cry

but people like you who put love on a shelf

must live in the shoes of sombody else

you've gone digging for gold but you'll see someday

when you long to hold what you've tossed a way

© Copyright 2007 teddy marvelle - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2007-08-28 06:29 AM


They say you lose what you don't value...so someday perhaps they will be found to have no value...James
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Gaia
2 posted 2007-08-28 07:01 PM


nice ending!
The Lady
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3 posted 2007-08-28 11:01 PM



excellent teddy!


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