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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2007-08-27 09:34 AM




Tremolo greetings


Tremolo greetings from an azurite pond  
echo the walls of a lapis lazuli sky,
awakening my inner spirit
as I sit by water’s edge,
cradling precious malachite stone
beneath silver slivered summer moon;
reflective furrowed amber thoughts
release themselves in sighs
from the depths of me,
as I hum a timeless melody
born in sweet Gaia harmony.

I greet the breath of dawn
in smile,
wrapped in Thoreauly
peaceful poetry.
~namaste, Midnitesun~

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (08-28-2007 09:47 AM).]

© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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1 posted 2007-08-27 11:48 AM


Beautiful and soft.and soft

enjuyed the read as always

Tomtoo

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-08-27 11:52 AM


as I hum a timeless melody
born in sweet Gaia harmony.


Dear Kacy, you have written a wonderful piece of poetry and Thoreau surely would agree ...

The two lines above remind me of my own humming when I feel connected to the whole of creation. You used the perfect words.

Love,
Margherita


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-08-28 01:34 AM


...Another Kacy keeper!

This one appealed to me on so many levels.

I like how your mind works ~ and how you work your penbrush.


Linda


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-08-28 06:22 AM


Enjoyed...James
MoonShadow
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5 posted 2007-08-28 07:48 AM


Stone Cold Lovely.... Rock on!

       MoonShadow
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Kahlil
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6 posted 2007-08-28 09:34 AM


"I greet the breath of dawn
in smile,
wrapped in Thoreauly
peaceful poetry."

...and I will now, too, after
reading this.  Lovely!

Midnitesun
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7 posted 2007-08-28 09:45 AM


Thank you!
Now, wonder how long it will take
before the poetry thieves
steal this one
and claim it
as their own!!!!!!!
I shall start embedding my name in each write...
to make it easier to 'prove' my authorship

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2007-08-28 10:07 AM


As always lady, it is such a pleasure to read you!  I'm so sorry to hear about that situation...how very uncool!!  me thinks tho' that we would all know the works of Midnitesun's pen anywhere tho'     Love ya gal!!

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

Midnitesun
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9 posted 2007-08-28 11:03 AM


ah Donna, you are such a sweet lady!
Thank you for reading this offering.
We simply MUST prevail against those internet thieves.....

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2007-08-28 11:13 AM


oh...I just found the other thread Kacy.........  
secondhanddreampoet
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11 posted 2007-08-28 07:13 PM


grand-fine 'word painted' imagery!

I LOVE the:  "Thoreauly" peaceful poetry(!)

sustained applause!!

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