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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Time Was Time was when you were the one I loved Time was when you were today and tomorrow Time was when we had only just begun, together just the two of us- we took our living as it came without sleepless nights and fuss… Time was when we were in love, my heart in you hands: our souls enclosed in our embraces Time was when we would daydream just what type of people we would be: our thoughts were dreams because we were in love Time was when I couldn’t last a day without you and the madness of the world were promises we couldn’t hear each day, each night, was our time so dear… Can’t I dream, and adore you, though we are so far apart? Or is 'time was' just my illusion living alone in my heart where time was… . [This message has been edited by JL (08-26-2007 08:11 AM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"the madness of the world were promises we couldn’t hear" Whatever makes that happen is to be treasured. Loved this, JL! "Time was" is merely a foundation for time will be and "keep the faith" can apply to so many things. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Can’t I dream, and adore you, though we are so far apart?" ~ but of course! lol  May the time that was, become your time that is and will be again.  Wistful, yet very sweet write. "Somewhere In Time" ~ EA  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Another beautiful touching write ..... Can’t I dream, and adore you, though we are so far apart? .....reading this line , I often ask the same question Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JL, I think anyone who has ever been in love can truely relate to this poem -- even those few lucky enough to still have that kind of relationship. Heartfelt. ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your "Time was" speaks very eloquently of those moments when time actually is not perceived, when we truly live we are unaware of the passing of time. Believe me, even in distance, we can share quality "time". Very intense write! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
In our minds we want the object of our affection to be in our face, but love requires no such bounderies...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Can’t I dream, and adore you, though we are so far apart? Or is 'time was' just my illusion living alone in my heart where time was… Such poignant questions. Beautiful write. A |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Can’t I dream, and adore you, though we are so far apart? Or is 'time was' just my illusion living alone in my heart where time was… very sad....the way things were at one time, to be changed now....go give your love to someone and care deeply, to now have times change.... sometimes life is cruel...JL, and I'm sendin a hug your way.... Lee J. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Can’t I dream, and adore you, though we are so far apart?" There are always dreams... perhaps an only remaining recluse... but they can't take that away... unless you give it away. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Time was when you were today and tomorrow" I know this time well JL beautiful! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Honeybunch: You are so right. Thanks for reading. EA???? Thanks Missy!! Hope: Thanks!! Iliana: I thank you, and yes you are so right. Margherita: Thank you so much. James: Thanks Mr. Aziza: Thank you. LeeJ: Not sad, really. Thanks for the hug! Moonshadow: Right. Thanks The Lady: Thank you, always great to get your feedback. Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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