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Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 197


0 posted 2007-08-25 04:44 PM


Your love is the fuel
this tired engine runs on.
Stoke the boiler
and hang a wrench on the safety valve

Pull the throttle wide open
on a down hill grade
If we split a seam,
scald me to death
with your steam

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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
1 posted 2007-08-26 10:01 AM


Yes, love certainly is the fuel.  Not many can run without it if the truth were known.  Welcome to Pip!
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-08-26 10:44 AM


Full steam ahead! Let your love engines roar!

Adorable analogy!


EA

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-08-27 01:01 PM


You are masterful with your words sir.  Much enjoyed this.  Nicely done indeed!

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2007-08-28 01:17 AM


Liked the analogy!  Enjoyed the read.  
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