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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas

0 posted 2007-08-25 04:29 PM


A step back. My wife said something about my white powdered footprint on the bathmat this morning and that brought this older piece to mind...thought I'd repost since she asked me to.

From 2001.................................

Talcum

Talcum.
Powder.
I seem to get it all over the place.
The tub, the floor, the vanity, and once in awhile,
under my arms, between my legs.
It seems to linger in the air, waiting
for me to breathe; if only I could ionize it,
spin around, toss it in the air,
let it cover me everywhere.
Then you wouldn’t get so upset,
grumble and gripe about cleaning it up.
I thought about doing it under the shower;
powdering myself that is,
but it still wouldn’t get where needed;
besides, every once in a while,
I see your footprint on the bathmat,
shades of blue surrounded by a dusting of white,
five and a half, I believe, a hundred and two,
five feet and a stretch, brown, shoulder length, blue,
soft and sweet, lingering on mine,
silky soft, hot and fiery ---
talcum, falling through the air,
covering everything,
coating the bathmat,
waiting,  waiting,
for that trace of you.

w.  james beard, jr.
© January 2001

[This message has been edited by jwesley (08-25-2007 11:06 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2007-08-26 12:58 PM


Not just a cute poem, Jimmy -- it's so sweet.  *hugs*...jo
aziza
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2 posted 2007-08-26 04:08 PM


I love this poem. It is such an intimate picture of your life with your wife.

Thank you for allowing me a glimpse of love.

A

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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3 posted 2007-08-26 04:47 PM


It shows how real life can be inspiring!

Very lovely!

Love,
Margherita

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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4 posted 2007-08-31 01:33 AM


I always love reading your poetry.  This is just plain poetic fun.  It makes me want to squeeze that talc bottle and see what happens!  This is a definite keeper!   I'm glad your wife encouraged you to share this again!

miscellanea

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