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The One And Only
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0 posted 2007-08-25 06:47 AM


I was just a guy fooling around,
But your heavenly eyes got me bound.

I couldn't resist your sweetness,
Nor could I resist your loveliness.

You made my life happily complete,
You are in control of my heartbeat.

All this time I'm trying to tell you,
How much, sweety, I love you.

Neither words nor actions were enough,
To show you how strong is my love.

So, Look into my eyes and see
How precious you are to me

You will feel different emotions,
That could fill the seven oceans.

A mix of love, jealousy and rage,
Looking for the day we will engage.
© Copyright 2007 The One And Only - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-08-25 10:21 AM

OneAndOnly~

WELCOME to this wonderful circle of poets and friends~

Your entry piece is an 'engaging' one~

Enjoyed ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-08-26 07:13 AM

Enjoyed this...James
The One And Only
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3 posted 2007-08-26 09:17 PM

Thank you for your kind, encouraging replies
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2007-08-27 02:27 PM

A lovely entrance, clear and lyrical in its simplicy.

Welcome to Passions.
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Gaia
5 posted 2007-08-27 02:28 PM

Ah, romance on a blue screen....welcome!
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