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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-08-25 12:30 PM


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The moon came that night,
upon her windowsill, she stepped,
wearing a thin, white, silken gown,

Dancing inside his light,
shimmering beams, for her, his queen,
upon her head, he had made a crown,

She loves the moon,he loves her,
the two are quit a pair,
for by his light, she is called,
As his beams shine through her hair,

Casting his magical love around,
she dances barefoot for him,
brighter becomes his glow,

Inside his lighted heart,
she must dive and swim,
Golden seas of love,
with perfect ebb and flow,

The moon is always magic,
unto my heart, his love forever calls,
keeping me under, poetic spell and trance,

His light of paradise,
shinning forth, we share,
lifes verse and song,

Dancing our moon dance,
to the rhythm of his heart,
all night long.

© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Bronzeage
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1 posted 2007-08-25 12:48 PM


A very nice piece. I enjoyed it very much, but photobucket thinks you are taking up too much room.
TomMark
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2 posted 2007-08-25 02:57 AM


so very beautiful and lovely

enjoyed happily

Tomtoo


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2007-08-25 10:28 AM


RH~
I knew I'd like this one ... by the bye ..
I clicked the EDIT icon and then went back to the piece and that lovely graphic showed up for me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-08-25 01:40 PM


Yes it is a great picture, it goes perfect with the poem!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-26 03:58 PM


Moon dancing...wonderful...James
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2007-08-26 04:44 PM


Inside his lighted heart,
she must dive and swim,
Golden seas of love,
with perfect ebb and flow,


True magic in this dance!

Love,
Margherita

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
7 posted 2007-08-26 10:44 PM


"She loves the moon,he loves her,
the two are quit a pair,
for by his light, she is called,
As his beams shine through her hair,"

   Sweet and Sensual. I much enjoyed.

            MoonShadow
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CastleGuard
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8 posted 2007-08-28 01:35 AM



Aaaahhh....those moon dances...

..are the best, no matter when, or where.

Loved it, ARH.

CG

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