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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-08-24 11:35 PM


             Divorce

Her love…proved…

a snowflake in the evening mist…

a fallen leaf floating to the ocean…

a nebular chime from tintinabular
   rhyme…

a moon-shadow in the dawn…

a morning cloud…

                  ~

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TomMark
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1 posted 2007-08-25 02:25 AM


ah, too much said in a few verses.

beauty of sadness.

enjoyed the read as always

aziza
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2 posted 2007-08-25 07:33 PM


Lovely

A

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3 posted 2007-08-25 07:42 PM


"a nebular chime from tintinabular
   rhyme..."

nice ring to this line

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