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Open Poetry #41

to feel your kiss (again)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2007-08-24 11:22 PM

I long
to feel your kiss

(again)

I took a walk
tonight

the sky suspended
in the dark
that drew upon it

and not a star
had shown

yet i felt your presence
to far eclipse
the silenced constellations

the magic in your eyes
so bright and beautiful

in the stillness,
reinging through.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-26-2007 08:45 PM).]

Bronzeage
Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

1 posted 2007-08-24 11:53 PM

A sweet write. I enjoyed this very much.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-08-25 12:00 PM

pleasant 'impressionistic' Romanticism!

applause!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-25 04:14 PM

Those kisses to look forward to...in anticipation...James

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