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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-08-24 06:40 PM


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Into the night
Looking back

Stay close
Behind he said

It’s not
That bad


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2007-08-24 09:11 PM


not sure I understand it John...does it have to do with the title?

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TomMark
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2 posted 2007-08-25 02:29 AM


my wish too

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2007-08-25 07:27 AM


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Thanks for reading

In WWI when one died
it was referred to as going West.
It's the direction of the last light
as the sun finally goes down.  I was
thinking of using Star Gate but that
would have had eveyone thinking of the
movie

Thanks again

John


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