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cokeiq Junior Member
since 2007-08-24
Posts 27 |
Hi everyone, I wrote this morning today. Fragments Began whole like fine china painted doll Woven well and simple thoughts pure bliss Observing a world through inexperienced eyes Love everywhere or so one believed Heat and scratches, day time shifts to twilight Abstract reasoning falls into place, Behaviors can mean anything Your best friend fades when complexity arises Broken jar, dried ink splashing crudely all around Void inside out, tasting defeat repugnant Total eclipse, fond memories taunt Deep within cave, hearing echoes Mould to shape where substance strengthens Baby doll is no more, Reflection on mirror a clear image Understanding penetrates when a stranger smiles |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cokei... Welcome to Passions! I see that you have been reading today. We hope that you will find Passions to be your home away from home. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Your best friend fades when complexity arises" Ain't that the truth. Great write. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Welcome to the blue pages. Interesting write. MoonShadow . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Greetings, cokeiq! Your debuting poem reminded me of a fractal or an abstract painting.  "Observing a world through inexperienced eyes" ~ One of the advantages of advancing years, is our ability to better understand what it is that we are observing. Mind you, the converse becomes true when the age becomes extremely advanced!  Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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cokeiq Junior Member
since 2007-08-24
Posts 27 |
Thank you for the comments! |
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