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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-08-24 09:20 AM

I dont hate you anymore
for driving the knife in deeper
while pretending to be something
that you never were

You've done the damage,
You know the score
I won't stoop to your level
nor would I try

when I see you
I'll just smile

I don't hate you anymore
but I will never trust you

again.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2007-08-24 09:23 AM

AMEN !!!

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

2 posted 2007-08-24 09:46 AM

Emotion charged with a relieving release.

MoonShadow
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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2007-08-24 12:08 PM

Yes we can forgive , but never forget

Hope

cokeiq
Junior Member

since 2007-08-24

Posts 27

4 posted 2007-08-24 04:38 PM

Trust must be earned as all of us slowly realize ... ... and a person who betrays words/promises soon loses that which had been given.

Since when have we been told to become fools?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-08-24 05:03 PM

And who needs friends, aquaitances, lovers or spouses that they can't trust...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-08-25 11:21 PM

I hear you loud and clear Donna!
well done

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-08-26 05:36 AM

Nice write.

JL

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2007-12-28 11:42 AM

I had almost forgotten to come and thank you all for your replies to this one. Thanks so much. Hugs.

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

9 posted 2007-12-29 12:52 PM

Wow! I really identified with this one. I trust very few people, until they prove themselves. Betrayal is huge. Great depiction....kat

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2007-12-29 01:16 AM

Pretty powerful poem, m'dear. It strikes home to many, I think - and I like your writing style. You just lay it out there in this poem ... simply said and your words hit the mark.

Well done, my friend.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2007-12-29 03:58 AM

excellent write my friend Donna.. Happy New Year to you love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

12 posted 2007-12-29 08:12 AM

When He sees that smile it will make him stop & think and one day....he will realise just what it was he has lost. Well said, much enjoyed...

Irish
Member

since 2006-05-02

Posts 50
Ft Benning

13 posted 2007-12-29 01:47 PM

Mind if I send this to the ex ?

dead on the money

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