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Pain you'll never know!
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Pain you'll never know! |
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poetryisapassion New Member
since 2007-08-23
Posts 8Arizona, USA |
THUMP THUMP THUMP beats my heart For it cannot part With this love that it once knew Like a bird on a feather it flew Then this pain STINGS like a knife Piercing my heart; ATTACKING it over and over Smashing it bit by bit til it's torn out And laying on the ground spewing blood all around It still beats faint as it takes it's last breath It screams with agony that you will not forget HOW HOW could you do this to me Leave me dying on the ground, so cold, so alone Last STABBING it once more to finish it off Never felt, Never loved, Never knew... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...many have felt the pain of rejection...James |
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poetryisapassion New Member
since 2007-08-23
Posts 8Arizona, USA |
Really? Thank you... See i've always liked writting poetry, but in high school my teacher said I would never be able to write... So it makes me very happy to have someone as experienced as you to post a reply. |
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cokeiq Junior Member
since 2007-08-24
Posts 27 |
I like it because it is passionate and do not let one teacher dictate your life. Teachers are humans capable of making mistakes too! |
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