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You Want A Bubble
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You Want A Bubble |
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sweetbomb Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48Canada |
You Want A Bubble You want predictability Embrace doubt. You want perfection Get real. You want to blame Look in the mirror. You want to be remembered Get stuffed. You want to make excuses Delete another day. You want peace Go loudly insane. You want nice dreams Stray from the herd. You want glory Give until it hurts. You want to be rich Sell everything. You want to wake up Work it out. You want to be in touch Take your shoes off. You want to believe Brush off the chip. You want to be free Remove the ego lifts. You want to own the world Become your worst friend. You want a bubble I have a pin. De Anna Lane Aston copyright 2007 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. This deserves to be read. John . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with John~~  M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I read this earlier today and just loved it. It fit my day to a T. Perfect. Thanks A |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A good read.I liked it. "late" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You want love...be prepared...James |
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cokeiq Junior Member
since 2007-08-24
Posts 27 |
Interesting read. It's amazing the amount of whining going on in the world Make something, give - don't take Do a favor without asking in return Bite your tongue before that sarcasm and then look within to see, feel and know never had been easy on either side has it? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sharp, concise. I know a few to whom I could send this. Well done! |
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sweetbomb Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48Canada |
Thank you. I like you all, already. lol. Keep on telling it like it is. And James, been in love. It SUCKS!!!!!!! lol D |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Very good!! Tomtoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I like this shoot-from-the-hip, tell-it-like-it-is poetic piece of poetic justice. The following are a few of my favourite lines (of which there are several!!!) "You want to blame Look in the mirror." "You want glory Give until it hurts." "You want to be in touch Take your shoes off." ~ For those who would like a peaceful, productive life, and have respect from others and for themself? ~ Do all of the above (as well as the other 'suggestions' mentioned in this insightful poem)!  Love & Light, EA  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is a powerful voice you have. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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