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poetryisapassion
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since 2007-08-23
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Arizona, USA

0 posted 2007-08-23 07:06 PM


How this day can be so sweet
I may have a little treat
And day by day I live through
Only one day I may become two
And when this day so blessed my soul
Will birds sing without a toll

And then the wreched heart must break
For thou I cannot forsake
And when ye hear the whistle blow
You will know that my life must be dull
And now ye hear these words I've said
Remember them and take them to thy bed

And hear the chorus sing below
Of such a great man we know
And if you hear ye name not
Then thou hast been forgot
And pass them by and by
And hear the sounds of a neverending lie!

[This message has been edited by poetryisapassion (08-23-2007 08:02 PM).]

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sweetbomb
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 48
Canada
1 posted 2007-08-23 09:48 PM


Life is a lie so might as well see the cup runningth over and have some fun with it as much as you can.
How about Life Is A Neverending Lie as a title?  Don't lie to yourself though. D

poetryisapassion
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since 2007-08-23
Posts 8
Arizona, USA
2 posted 2007-08-23 10:01 PM


hmmm... I don't know... I didn't write about the lies.. Its about a great man who has a wonderful life and does so many things but no one ever reconizes what he did for the world...
Sunshine
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3 posted 2007-09-06 10:12 AM


The One Alone might work as a title. Sometimes it is very difficult to give a title to a work...

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Tears-of-Sanity
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Kingdom Hearts
4 posted 2007-09-09 01:51 AM


This poem is nice...
as a title I suggest:  Song Unknown!

Tears of Sanity

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