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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-08-23 04:57 PM



      Loon Lake

The sun rises suddenly
over solitary mountains,
flaming cold light…
a loon’s cry
echoes in the dawn
of Life’s immensity!
          ~

© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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1 posted 2007-08-23 05:22 PM


read it, saw it and heard it with wonderful feelings

beautiful read

tom too

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Gaia
2 posted 2007-08-24 07:38 AM


My spirit glides
in harmony
with this loon.

Margherita
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3 posted 2007-08-24 08:03 AM


Wonderful imagery and message!

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
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4 posted 2007-08-25 11:25 PM



what is it about loons poet?
this one cried out to me
beautifully done

Snowflake From Hell
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5 posted 2007-08-27 02:37 PM


love the imagery

I am the little cracked mirror

ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2007-08-27 05:00 PM


Felix and Sally may have seen some loons in the Delaware off Port Richmond. We have loons in the Delaware, but the voice of the loon is elusive here, eclipsed by I-95 traffic. Beautiful poem, though.
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7 posted 2007-08-27 05:03 PM


I see there are at least two of us who enjoy
writing about loons...

Nicely done!!

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-08-28 12:43 PM


A vivid vignette.

Loves 'n Loons,
Linda

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9 posted 2007-10-14 07:53 PM


Beautiful poem and message.
                    Ida

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