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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-08-23 07:23 AM



"I Loved You More"

I loved you more.
You were the greatest part of me.
I loved you more.
I never felt such love before.
You gave your love and set me free.
Our soul as one has ceased to be.
I loved you more.

MoonShadow
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aziza
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1 posted 2007-08-23 11:00 AM


This made me all warm in my heart.

Very nice.
A

JL
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2 posted 2007-08-23 11:14 AM


Nice write!!
JL


The Lady
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3 posted 2007-08-23 11:21 PM




beautiful gentle Sir MoonShadow
and so sad

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
4 posted 2007-08-24 06:15 AM


Thank you all for your kind words and response.

        MoonShadow
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