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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2007-08-21 10:43 PM



I am listening
to the monotonous droning of the weather wire,
taking in the living numbers and the stats.
Yet in my imagination, I sit
naked and barefooted
in the blood-warm shallows of a deserted, stormy beach,
feeling the power of Her ocean swells
crashing over me,
the tidal, elemental passion of the sea,
throbbing me, beating me,
kneading me, needing me,
breathing and exhaling me,
swallowing then giving birth to me,
letting me hear the moaning
of Her labor and desire for me,
taking the throbbing of my blood
and giving me Her Life,
surging into and then out of me,
taking and then giving me,
giving me then yielding me,
Letting me feel Her elemental passion,
the elemental passion of the sea.
That she will personify herself to me,
step out of my fantasy and come real for me,
if I will just be patient.

Floating in the tropical leaf of the tropopause
Southern Cross



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-08-22 10:07 AM


quote:
throbbing me, beating me,
kneading me, needing me,
breathing and exhaling me
(and)
Letting me feel Her elemental passion,
the elemental passion of the sea.
That she will personify herself to me,
step out of my fantasy and come real for me,
if I will just be patient.

WHOOHOO! What a passionate write!
That would be quite a fantasy-come-true.
Happy Wednesday, Jaime. Hope your accu-weather reality is not too stormy?!?

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable
2 posted 2007-08-22 12:41 PM


Yes, Kacy.
But now I got to come down, or maybe up, and face the realities of this world of clocks and papers,
find a barber and get sheared.
SC

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