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akies2004
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since 2007-08-20
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0 posted 2007-08-21 10:34 PM


So I haven't wrote in about 3 years ... so it's not my greatest piece, but please tell me what you think!

Am I doing the right thing?

Unlocking my heart

Leading to a possible break?

Careful, quiet

The tears that I cry

Surrounding me

Looking into the past

The hurt, the bruises

The memories

That we have been through

My heart and I

Not sure if we can take anymore

Weary of others

Not sure of their intentions

My heart

Ripping at the seams

Not sure if I will make through

Another letdown

Another tear

Time heals all

How much time

Before I break?

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2007-08-22 10:34 AM


Take care of that heart...
Welcome to Passions!

Please,

Check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

2 posted 2007-08-28 01:41 PM


A delicately weaved poem... enjoyed the read!

*~coco~*
cokeiq
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since 2007-08-24
Posts 27

3 posted 2007-08-28 05:49 PM


Still water calm surface but Watch!
Beneath old veil lies a voice pleading

Walking on in deserted land,
thirst foreign, famished
fatigue, almost numb
to point of collapse

Scars a reminder,
lessons learned
forever

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