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Quicksilver Nights |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Quicksilver Nights I fall…to sleep… on quicksilver nights, (under a pensive, halo-wispy Summer moon) with the relentless melancholy of the latter-day wise… to awake from dark, delicious dreams that taste of Autumn’s rainbow-embers, flaming in immense and windy spaces of high-country serenity, with an embryous faith in love's new dawn! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"halo-wispy" and "latter-day wise" but especially "dark, delicious dreams" Delightful phrases, as always. To sleep, perchance... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
indeed a breathtakingly beauty. always good read TomToo |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, Very good work. It moves along. Bobby |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~love those quicksilver nights~~~ ~great poem, dreampoet~~~ |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Read and re-read, the circular choreography and motion of this poem creates a different focus from some you've posted. This aspect of the work intrigues beyond the poem's fine words. It mirrors the season; it feels like transformation. Beautifully written, and greatly enjoyed. (For the dancers out there, doesn't the choreography read like a collaboration between Tharp, Duncan and Lubavitch?) Poet, you are sooo good! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this dances like a dream series....you write the 'poet' well... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice work. JL  |
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