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0 posted 2007-08-20 09:12 AM



Michael turned the book of prayers
Letting his fingertips run across bindings
So he could feel the faint traces of her fingertips

He already knew the words

Still turned open to a page
He slid the pad of finger along the line
Reciting words to himself that had long ago
Meant more to him than now

Before he learned the heart held more
Than a blind obedience to god
Or that the cruelty of man was somewhat offset
By the way a woman could love
Be loved
In the right hands

Soft the vellum rustled
As pages turned in an absent way
Fell one on top another when his eyes strayed
To the small print within the margins
Neatly scribed
In a fine hand reflecting care
The words be put just right and say
What was inside the meditations of her prayers

“I know nothing of being loved but what I have learned at his will”
he gently traced the string of letters
letting his mind go back to where it began
as he felt the wind tug at his wings he stood
head bowed in a supplication of dreams
wondering the how he might have made it more
than the nightly descent into her realm
where he had touched her as might a man
who had wed her to his hand

With a sigh
He knelt and slowly shaped a hole with hands
Then placed the book tenderly within
And sealed it with the dirt he had removed
Marking its place with a cairn of stone
He plucked two feathers
Now grey from age and the fall from grace
As came afterwards

And threaded them upon a fine braid of twine
Tying one end to the earth
Letting them catch free the breeze
To flutter as might a mad moth before a flame

He knew he would return
Knew where he here marked the grave of words
For his memory was long
The years meant nothing to him

While she
Meant enough to

Sin

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1 posted 2007-08-20 10:15 AM


its so good to read you again....I could spend hours reading you....your words are like a good book on a rainy day....

~~**~~
Life is a balance
of holding on and letting go (KU)

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2 posted 2007-08-20 10:49 AM


Beautiful, wonderful poem.

thank you for sharing

enjoyed

Tomtoo

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3 posted 2007-08-20 11:12 AM


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4 posted 2007-08-20 11:42 AM


Lauren,
thank you sweety for the kind words and eyes... it is nice to be back.

Tom, thank you.. I am pleased you found something worthwhile in this to read..


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5 posted 2007-08-20 11:42 AM


Belle....
thank you kid..for the constant encouragement..and the kind words.

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6 posted 2007-11-05 01:00 PM


It isn't accidental that, after a long absence, it should be your work I open first. And oh... what a gift this is!!! I've tried to write of Lucifer... but not one of my efforts have half the power or poignancy of this. *sigh*

Superb work, my friend... this one's going into my library... wrapped in a soft shade of envy... I wish I had written this! *S*

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2007-11-05 06:25 PM


You have not lost your touch my friend.
Well done, indeed

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