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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2007-08-19 11:31 PM



Stubborn Old Gal


Although my life, has crumbled
Yet another time
I have refrained from telling you
Just what's on my mind

I hold it all deep inside me
Beating myself to death
It seems it doesn't matter
That, I try to do my best

Life it seems has a way of
Throwing those awful curves
Once again those feelings
So unwanted, start to stir

Maybe I am a real fool for
Never giving in to defeat
Sometimes it seems so clear
That I really am beat

Still, being that stubborn
Old gal I appear to be
I just can't seem to let myself
Give in to such defeat

I struggle as hard as I can
To bring myself back up
To where I can make myself
Get back up out of this rut

With no one here to talk to
It isn't always easy
Still, I do the best that I can
To get back on my feet

Copyright by Sue Graves
8-19-07



© Copyright 2007 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
HopeS
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1 posted 2007-08-20 03:24 AM


When the going gets tough , the touch get going


Hope

HopeS
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2 posted 2007-08-20 03:24 AM


When the going gets tough , the tough get going


Hope

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2007-08-20 04:42 AM


I think we've all been where you are at some time or other.  It takes me a long time to get "back on my feet" so carry on being stubborn and you'll get there quickly.  A slice of everybody's life here.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-08-20 05:17 AM


Nice writing...sounds like one of those times when you have to go on, just because you have to...Mind you I didn't say because you want to, or because you're pleased with whats coming your way, I said you have to go on because sometimes its like that...James
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-08-20 07:22 AM


Sue, your strength, courage, faith, endurance ~ and yes, your stubborness ~ have bode you well thus far! You are a survivor!

I pray that the road you have been traveling, will get easier! You deserve a break!

Sending you lots of love,
Linda

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Gaia
6 posted 2007-08-20 07:43 AM


Being "stubborn" is often a very positive trait!
Hope things smoothe out a bit for you Sue, and don't forget you always have friends here!

TomMark
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7 posted 2007-08-20 11:04 AM


wonderful, wonderful read. good girl!

Tomtoo

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2007-08-21 04:59 PM


you write very real and truthful to the pen

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