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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2007-08-19 02:16 PM






~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com   

© Copyright 2007 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-08-19 02:25 PM


a most pleasant (and wonderfully 'shaped')
'write' overlaying a fine graphic image!

applause!!

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2 posted 2007-08-19 02:35 PM


Dear Marge:

I love this! It's wonderful!  Reminds me of standing outside watching the space station and Endeavor, flying over us, last week.
Such an amazing event. I liked the part about coming home, in your poem however. no matter how exciting space travel is, or dreamed of, coming home has to be the best part!

Love
Betty Lou

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3 posted 2007-08-19 02:45 PM


MT,  you are the best at what you do, and
this is no exception....Love the picture.

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4 posted 2007-08-19 02:46 PM


Marge, I adore how you "sprinkle stardust 'cross" these blue pages!

Your poetic ink is pure indigo!

Love & Lunar Magic,

Earthy One

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5 posted 2007-08-19 03:51 PM


Marge, I think there are many of us who would like a trip to the moon. How nicely you wrote it. But as you, Home is where we want to return. "late"
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6 posted 2007-08-19 04:46 PM


Transcendient, Marge!   ....jo
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-08-19 04:54 PM


Nice Marge...how about I zoom you to the top...James
Jess
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8 posted 2007-08-19 05:43 PM


Beautiful imagery. And the phrase "indigo rhymes" Well I reread that part a few times because it was so pretty.
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9 posted 2007-08-19 06:07 PM


as beautiful as always.

enjoyed the read.

Tomtoo

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10 posted 2007-08-19 07:03 PM


Another matched beauty flows from your talents.  Lovely!

   Rae

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11 posted 2007-08-19 11:46 PM


Beautiful! I love to see your talent.
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12 posted 2007-08-20 04:54 AM


Stunning!  
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13 posted 2007-08-20 10:21 AM


I love your 'moon' poems....the pictures is perfect...

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of holding on and letting go (KU)

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14 posted 2007-08-20 03:51 PM



   Marge... when you go, take me with you.
           Lovely write and image.

                    MoonShadow
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15 posted 2007-08-20 06:51 PM


Let's go play galactic pinball! LOL, I enjoyed this zigzag planetary trip!
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16 posted 2007-08-20 08:34 PM


ok, is that TWA or American Airlines...cuz I wanna go...you make it sound like it is...and so beautifully....

Thank you Margie

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17 posted 2007-08-23 03:40 PM


I love this
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18 posted 2007-08-23 07:34 PM


Is your pen on fire? This one was smoking, Marge!
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