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Will_Rhyme
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0 posted 2007-08-19 12:25 PM



Far below the dog star's slumber,
far below the crab;
fell among the chrome cast shadows,
fell and lodged against night's brow.

Dripping
  down that seamless stairway;
dripping
down upon the slabs
of sided pillows, dusted even
are the frozen castle trowels.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-08-19 09:24 AM


Welcome to Passions, Will!
I look forward to reading more of your work.

Please,

check your Email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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2 posted 2007-08-19 12:14 PM


A very mysterious feel to this poem, most
interesting.  Welcome to Passions!

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-08-19 03:09 PM


Love the mystical feel to this ethereal write!

Hi, Will_Rhyme! Welcome to our circle of poet friends! I enjoyed your debut poem!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

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