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I Wait |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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I Wait there is poetry inside my head in dirt beneath the nails under the bell jar waiting to spill like fluid liquid in tender folds and wrinkled time as moisture gathers under dome deep beneath feeding tender roots fragile is the touch of petals pastel flows to crimson time and I wait "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Will_Rhyme New Member
since 2007-08-18
Posts 7ky, usa |
Very nice work....I like your style in and descriptions...and the brevity of ur poem |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"there is poetry inside my head" - there is indeed! Enjoyed! |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
"pastel flows to crimson time" beautifully worded |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Indeed, there truly is poetry inside your head. Beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Poetry flows through your fingers! Fine one! *hugs*...jo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely penned ma'am... |
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EmilySian Junior Member
since 2007-08-19
Posts 21England |
This is lovely. I really liked it.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
as always, you seem to touch a place in me that only understanding can. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Sounds like something will bloom soon brilliant and beautiful, no doubt. MoonShadow . |
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