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Open Poetry #41
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-08-18 06:48 PM

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My wife cooking rice
Can you see her

Tell her
I love her

Oh dear wife
I’m so afraid


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-08-19 05:09 PM

Nice writing...James
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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2 posted 2007-08-19 06:06 PM

remind me of Utah Mine. heart breaking event.

short but rich in emotions

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo
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