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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2007-08-17 09:15 PM

I Hear You…

My child, I've heard your whispers
when you speak to the silence in your mind,
you ask Me what I see in you
if I see in you any reason or rhyme.

Come, for I see the great cheer in you
   and in you I see the delight,
as you go forth to the less fortunate
   and guide them through the night.

I see Myself the lone shame in you
   for past transgressions wrought,
I see the forgiveness that you ask
   for realizing what can't be bought.

I see in you, My child, the hurt
   over your genetically stubborn pride,
and I would ask that you continue to pray
   and from Me, no, please, never hide.

I see past pain, and continued hope
   I see troubled shadows creep within,
I see you raise your eyes to heaven
   I see the trembling in your chin.

And then I see your very grace,
   as the tears well up in your eyes
every time you lift your face
   your love cannot be compromised.

I see a heart that bares its soul
   I see you think to impart great golden goals

even though your own have not been met
   for you have prayed to Me. No, I don't forget.

I see you try to do your best,
   and every day you wonder "oh my ~
did I slip, break a heart, or worse?"
   that's when I catch you on the fly.

O My child, continue on,
do your best in this, My name
and continue please to pray to Me,
and I will keep you from harm, and shame.

Love, God

©KRJ
22 June 2000

[Revised, 08-17-07]

Posted originally in Spiritual, but now I have several additional grandchildren who may someday find this to be more appropriate in Open. Thank you for reading.

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2007-08-17 10:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful. pure and shinning.

love the read.

Tomtoo

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2007-08-17 11:37 PM

Karilea, this really touched me. Thank you for sharing it.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
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3 posted 2007-08-18 04:26 AM

I really liked this it had a very nice message and flow.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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4 posted 2007-08-18 07:09 AM

Enjoyed the message...James

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-08-18 12:30 PM

Beautiful poetry!!
No matter what forum.

JL

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2007-08-18 02:24 PM

Nice, just what it should be and how it
should be as well. Thanx KJ

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

7 posted 2007-08-18 05:05 PM

I enjoy your sojourns into meter and rhyme.
Nicely written.

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