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Open Poetry #41

A Little Bit of Sweetpie

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-08-17 03:09 PM

A Little Bit of Sweetpie

In the arms of
that special woman
that means all of
the world to me.

A touching of lips
given so soft
and tenderly.

We're busy
sharing kisses
laced with
sensuality.

JamesLee
17August
2007

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-08-17 04:14 PM

"sharing kisses
laced with
sensuality."

nice, JamesM

sweetbomb
Junior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 48
Canada

2 posted 2007-08-17 09:23 PM

Senuous. Cool. I liked it. Check out Spit Out The Pits, a different way of saying "it". lol. D

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-08-18 04:22 AM

I really enjoyed this very sweet.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-08-18 06:56 AM

Thank you nakdthoughts, sweetbomb and hunnie_girl for the nice responses...James

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