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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-08-17 07:29 AM



I Was Wondering Why

With my mind over matter
I was searching around
Question marks remain
Answers need to be found

Always thinking too much
The questions continue
My mind having no rest
While searching for a clue

Continuing upon my quest
My mind sent to and fro
Whilst awaiting answers
Frustration begins to show

The one who could answer
Had given me no reply
Things they left unsaid
My mind was wondering why


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ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
1 posted 2007-08-17 12:01 PM


Why is the question that you've put upon me
Of that unspoken word that you long for desperately.  Well I'll tell you in just a few words. I LOVED IT, I LOVED IT.
I hope you heard.
This was beautiful HopeS.

Garfield

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

2 posted 2007-08-21 10:56 AM


I really like this one!!!!!
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