do of waxman - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-08-17 06:37 AM

man of monkey fist
with folded arms
you dance with the dragons
and write their epitaphs
on fortune cooking paper

the sirens of saxony
worship your bamboo forests
with pale breasts uncovered
they wear the red lines
of falling on love

and there are no rings
for the samurai to wear
when his fingers are gone
under the water
of broken battles

when his ribs are dens
for the beetle's wings
strumming the humble
like wind in bottles
before a swallow

peaceful is never an ending

___________

daark

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2007-08-17 06:57 AM

daark~

amazing, amazing imagery...the beetle in the ribcage....wow...surreal...intense...unique...love it...reading you is like looking at a Dali painting...just transports you~

great heady stuff~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2007-08-17 07:09 AM

agree.. amazing imagery.. and a pace in this to first rush the reader through..then draw them back to contemplate....

always a pleasure

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-08-17 08:37 AM

yes, enjoying the imagery here and this is for sure a read more than once write

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-08-17 08:49 AM

One doesn't just read you D, they feel you. You draw the reader in and then capture them slowly until they become lost in the words.

So much in this one Daark...a true pleasure to read this today.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

5 posted 2007-08-17 12:22 PM

I love this one....It is defineitly one to meditate on.....

I could read it over and over again and find new meaning each time....you are AMAZING!!! "peaceful is never an ending"... isn't that the truth.

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2007-08-17 03:17 PM

bel1e, thanks daughterskin...you make me smile always.

_________

Capt Cpat, thank you sir for the reads, I am humbled by your comments

___________

Suesea, you climb me gentle with your eyes, thanks ms

__________

ms Donna, thank you for taking a tour of my mind places

___________

angel, always a treat to have you lean over my shoulder...thank you lady

__________

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.