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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-08-16 07:04 PM



Money Problems

There’s a pain in my head that will not go away,
it sits there and throbs during most of the day.
With bills on the mat and no cash in the bank
and credit cards creaking… I think my ship’s sank!

The future is looming, my mind’s filled with fear,
why is it that living is so bloody dear?
With a wife and two children depending on me,
I’ll need more than pure luck to set all of us free.

Financial worries can make your life hell,
every ounce of your being consumed by their spell.
We feel there’s a reason we should be ashamed,
so hide them from others to protect all our names.

This pain in my head, that will not go away,
cannot be relieved just by earning more pay.
It’s cure calls for direction in leading my life
and enjoying the love of my children and wife.

Living each day with a good share of fun
whilst paying respect to what needs to be done.
But no need to worry myself till I’m sick,
just let the odd creditor wait for a bit.

You won’t go to jail for not paying a bill,
but your family will suffer if you make yourself ill.
So count all your blessings, have fun on the way
and dream you’ll inherit a fortune one day!

Ivor G Davies


The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2007-08-16 09:18 PM


Well done,
very enjoyable about a very unenjoyable subject.

I think I will never see
that mythical money tree,
that every year will shead
leaves of bank notes instead,
so I might gather them each fall
to pay off creditors when they call.

Gloom


JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2007-08-16 11:49 PM


"You won’t go to jail for not paying a bill,
but your family will suffer if you make yourself ill.
So count all your blessings, have fun on the way
and dream you’ll inherit a fortune one day!"

Heart warming close.  
I was curious to see
how this would end.
Great attitude.

JL



Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2007-08-17 09:42 AM


Enjoying each day in whatever way you can...that is the key.
The bills never go away as fast as the precious moments with family and friends do,
so enjoy!!

Fairplay
Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
4 posted 2007-08-18 05:35 PM


I have no money to worry about.......

So I am quite happy to let everyone else worry about it......

Eric

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2007-08-18 05:39 PM


Eric's response made me laugh.. and it's true  there is more to life than worrying about bills all the time.


M

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2007-08-18 05:44 PM


Money problems?!? ~ I thought money grew on trees! lol


Linda

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
7 posted 2007-08-18 09:22 PM


Understanding this and loving the ending!   Good to read you once again!

miscellanea

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