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Darnation |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
She spoke in tones too harsh For such a lovely woman dressed so nice, But it was the tones not the word That cursed never using the same word twice. I wondered, Mused to myself about her, What vileness Had so violently brought this mild inspire. But far too soon Her passage was made across the ground In crowded venue Too soon out of sight and out of sound. Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely captured... the moment the character... and if one cares to give it a little thought a nice metaphor... I enjoyed |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~ah...what a vehement glimpse inside your window~ ~enjoyed Prof~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
So you must be reporting on another! I liked this... And I really like the title!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice snapshot, Professor |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you all for taking the time to read and respond Gloom |
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