A Butterfly she can be when she is not the BEA

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Open Poetry #41

A Butterfly she can be when she is not the BEA

Beaone12
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since 2007-08-15

Posts 24
Iowa

0 posted 2007-08-16 12:33 PM

The lighter side of me is not being a bee,
but a butterfly, so sweet an' pretty an' free.
I will show my colors true with the finest of hue.
From light to dark or from bright to dim,
I am full of live and find nothing grim.

I flitter and flatter my mary way,
I will sit on blossoms every day.
My heart is filled with lives lust,
and on my wings, I carry butterfly dust.

Every morn' I start anew, I know my heart a bit it grew.
I swing and sway in the sun, for that is my daily fun.

When the day is o'er and night is here,
I lay my wings to rest without a fear.
For morn' light will bring the sun ray,
and in it I will once again play.

Bea-ing the Queen of my hive.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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1 posted 2007-08-16 12:44 PM

Delightful read with such positive attitude. Nicely done.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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2 posted 2007-08-16 12:44 PM

nice read

sandgrain
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3 posted 2007-08-16 11:00 PM

I enjoyed this post very much.

Rae

SmartChick
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4 posted 2007-08-16 11:31 PM

A very delightful poem to read.

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

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LA,CA

5 posted 2007-08-17 12:11 PM

very lovely.

enjoyed the read

Tomtoo

Beaone12
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since 2007-08-15

Posts 24
Iowa

6 posted 2007-08-17 05:09 PM

Thank you all for your kind words about my poem.

Bea-ing the Queen of my hive.

MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14

Posts 85
Virginia

7 posted 2007-09-14 04:11 PM

what a nice, fun poem, very nicely written!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-09-15 07:41 PM

Smiling here!

Mind you, I like 'beas' as well as butterflies!

A precious little piece of poetic you!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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9 posted 2007-09-15 08:07 PM

delightful to read....

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

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Charlotte, NC

10 posted 2007-09-19 09:06 AM

this put a huge smile on my face!
beeeeeeutiful write

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2007-09-19 01:20 PM

This is a beautiful poem. You might proof read and check your spelling but I love it.

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