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Being Without
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Being Without |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Being Without Blinded by thoughts, hoping they lay in the past instead, choking back the moments that once prevented movement, holding feet to the ground, fragments all around to shatter the day's whispers telling me the heart beats to live. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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kasey191 Junior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 33Australia |
i cant quite figure this one out |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..the heart beats to live... it is the soul m'friend that lives for more.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
totally understanding this one M. Hugs |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
kasey191, welcome... I am having an anxiety(attack) day and if you have ever had one (which I hope you never do) thoughts jumble and you can't do what you set out to do. Your feet stay put when you know you need to move on to whatever is waiting for you, whether it's a chore, bill paying, a job, basic normal every day activities. Your heart is beating so fast you can feel the pounding and your sensitivities are stronger than usual. You have to force yourself to "live". It's one of those days for me when I feel I am not in control. Thank you  "C", I understand that totally  thanksDonna, I know you know that there are days that the past can choke the "now" out of you, making you wish you could just stay in bed until the day is over. Thanks  M |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
M~ I can feel the "shatter" this comes from~ ~soft hug~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Whisper, Lost in the sounds, Shattering If any quiet might be found, Thoughts of today Yesterday and the possible Which often once was the impossible, Battering Thoughts that might be just a whisper Away Gloom |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
"telling me the heart beats to live" Some days you will wonder, and other days you will know it is true. Christopher W Herbert 6576 Listening to the Wind 18 August 2007 Tell me the heart beats to live. Some days you will wonder, and other days you will know it is true. Three words, - “I love you” Tell me the truth, would love ever bound. A world, a global unity, to seek, to find, found. Tell me, just tell me, is gold a symbol of wealth. Or was the precious things, to live a life, hold fast in good health. To die a pauper, and live to know love, eyes of tiredness, a good deed. The hunger of a book, passion, a feeling in need. © 2007 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet) All Rights Reserved a poet who cares |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a brief but grand-fine 'write'! [that (sadly) 'speaks my life' as well!] [perhaps one has to dodge those 'outrageous slings and arrows of (anti-)fortune' many times to totally understand this one?!] serious, sustained applause!! |
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