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Gift Unwrapping
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Gift Unwrapping |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
a gift awaits before the eyes in mystery cloaked tied with neat ties the mind ponders with curious joy the secret within with mind to toy the knotted streams tied into bows arranged precisely one to next flows and the mind follows what the eyes take each loop undone raises the stake and when at last close to revelation about to dispel all speculation there within beckons as a mischievous ghost yet once again another host... CG |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Much enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of this. Nicely penned. |
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catgirl789 New Member
since 2007-08-15
Posts 8 |
This poem is nice and I loved that it rhymed. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, had fun writing it. CG |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~what a curious poem~ ~enjoyed |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, bel1e, curious I was hoping to be... a poem... about a poem CG |
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