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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2007-08-15 07:40 AM

What question shall I ask you,
For finding the inner you,
What small bits of talk will give me that view?
What movements are there to see
That will help enlighten me,
What walk, sway, or pausing pose will it be?
Pardon me now as I stare
The true you I wish to share,
Help me please with this modest questionnaire

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-08-15 07:46 AM

I love the concept

and the poem. Nicely done Proff.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2007-08-15 09:30 AM

sometimes actions lead the way~~

nicely done

M

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2007-08-15 10:26 AM

* chuckling*

I am at time easily amused... and the amusement here is in the title not the poem...

the poem is actually interesting...

perhaps I should monitor my own replies to some pieces as they might seem I was oblivious to the poetry and treated what I read only as an opportunity to voice my opinon...

enjoyed the humor sir.... and the poem.

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

4 posted 2007-08-15 11:14 AM

Heh, this is great Gloom. Good job.

"Well I wish that you would cheat with someone, 'cause you're like diggin' holes in water and we know that can't be done."

Roysie
Member

since 2007-08-05

Posts 102
Canada

5 posted 2007-08-15 11:35 AM

We somehow got off on the wrong foot Professor. I'd like to start again if you would forgive my previous arrogant comments.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-08-15 09:18 PM

I really enjoyed the concept of this poem. Nicely done.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2007-08-16 03:14 PM

Thank you, Gentle Spirit,
Pleased my words pleased you.

Thank you, M
I do tend to judge by what one does
Thanks for taking the time to respond

Thank you, Cpat Hair,
I am Glad you could enjoy these humble words.

Thank you, Edward Grim,
Your praise honors me

Thank you, hunnie_girl,
I must say the concept came to me from outside
But the words are mine

Gloom

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2007-08-16 05:01 PM

Yup, I like it. Provokes much thought, emotions and images. Nice one Prof.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

9 posted 2007-08-16 08:27 PM

Ask me about the things I wear,
not on my skin or in my hair.
But those I wear upon my soul
and form the essence of my whole.

These questions tell you who I am
but listen not with ears of man.
But wear my answers on your soul
if sharing truly is your goal.
~~~~
However it may be easier to get the answer sheet off somebody else!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

10 posted 2007-08-16 09:32 PM

Thank you, LarryC,
I do like to provoke
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, ivordavies,
So few here give a poetic response anymore
I am honored

Gloom

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