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Gypsy Love |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Gypsy Love After a night... of terrible stillness and relentless sorrows, what ‘hope’ shall fix a broken dawn, beyond the wayward flight of her gypsy love… what sunbeams and daydreams shall dance, to warm a freeze-dried heart and chase this twilight from my soul, when I know...I must allow her spirit to run forever free... with wolves in winter woods! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 oh, how sad! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
.. and - Oh, how lovely the poem is as it wears the sadness .. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Your writing suits me....I don't feel sadness with this....rather, a sort of bitter-sweetness. Enjoyed......jo |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
This is great Bruce. I really like it man. Two thumbs up, and if I had an extra thumb it'd be up there too.  "Well I wish that you would cheat with someone, 'cause you're like diggin' holes in water and we know that can't be done." |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
oh...this is beautiful ...tinged with sorrow.... the free wolf-spirit image at the end....tugs at the soul, indeed~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks to all who commented on this 'write'!! [I most assuredly appreciate it!] |
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