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Magnus
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0 posted 2007-08-14 06:10 PM



Shadows may fall into the earth as the sun races into the night sky.   Stars may
twinkle, invitingly....do you hear their sigh?    Rains may dampen the earth,
muddling the mix of soil until a single grain fall no more.  And ever, ever
shall the birds fly, the air cool, the waters flow into the oceans near...For only
they stand between us....between me, between you....as our breaths mingle
and merge as one.

© Copyright 2007 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-08-14 06:45 PM


I hear the sighs, see the birds and feel the ocean sweet air...thank you for giving me a moment of delightful thought

Hugs
Lee J.

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2007-08-14 07:22 PM


It must be that old spice you're wearing!
Ahoy.


A beauty.

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2007-08-14 07:24 PM


So softly lovely sir Magnus....a beautiful sigh.....
Sunshine
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4 posted 2007-08-14 09:07 PM


TD caught me up with her reply...

I loved hugging my dad, and his Old Spice...

so this all has left me
with a satisfied grin.


iliana
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5 posted 2007-08-15 03:09 AM


Lovely writing, BJ, you ole' romantic devil, you!  
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-08-15 05:01 AM


Nice...James
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7 posted 2007-08-15 07:28 AM


been working on those swoon tactics I see m'friend...
this is softly pleasing and i am sure one to cause a few sighs as the ladies read and dream...

well done... indeed

The Lady
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8 posted 2007-08-15 11:16 PM




romance belongs to you Barry
and does indeed cause sighs

sigh...


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