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everyone has a story (inspired by Baby girl)
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everyone has a story (inspired by Baby girl) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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and we pine impatiens under a tree which grows a might spine...soft, yet prickly, at times, while moon thoughts bend and ricochet...like eyes, warm with excitement. And joy it comes to us poorly, for awhile, then leaves us lucratively entangled oh familiar, predictable nefarious schemes burned out by demons who opened the heart to drip, drip, drip all to oft, red flames bleeding dry meager inflictions I say… please disprove panic knocked guilt rubbing me like gritted teeth against images burned on my flesh deftly, tender kisses the outlaw, conflicting honor’s splendor like an aura of sensuality pushing pushing me a little closer to the edge I push back, until I've regained ground she knows a secret that begs a perfect way to forget… panic seized, thundering rhythms deeply inside her breasts locks her in a gaze embezzling my pay roll, humiliation proves right armed rumors to be just that remarkable, the intense debt clothed in noble ambition and common sense when she thinks about how she can resist yet his scent nags her own thoughts until she can no longer deny his gaze mocks her dreams which circles the room her white silk blouse corners his passion is he really fascinated or simply amused? flattered by the bud of flirtation’s prey I shall die again and again to taste his deep red lips to enhale his being evaluating artistic merit and moral suitability and we pine impatiens under a tree which grows a might spine...soft, yet prickly, at times, while moon thoughts... [This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-16-2007 10:21 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
enchanting, passionate...enjoyable!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The trip into your mind is such an enjoyable place to be Lee. Have missed reading you lady. Hugs. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
omg...LeeJ~~~ I don't know what to say....except that this truly touched me deeply...I will read it again and again....  this is truly...stunning~~~  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's been a dry spell of reading for me, but when I search for the well, and it finds me, the drowning can be a delicious sin... well done, LeeJ! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
A story to tell , Lee I love the way you tell them Hope |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can see her in this goblet ms...hand painted by a lady with lovely mind shoes..enjoyed it |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes, indeed everyone has a story... well done ma'am.. you captured something of perceptions and of inner thoughts that show an attention to detail ... one to read again and again... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great story Lee J. Penned to perfection. JL  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your inkwell is deep and is always worth exploring. Poetic magic dwells within your well! Love to you, Lady Lee poetess! Linda  |
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