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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2007-08-14 12:41 PM


Shattered glass and petals
The roses have fallen to the floor
What once was love and beauty
Has gone the way of nevermore

I try to gain composure
Dab a tissue to my eyes
Then say goodbye to fairy tales
Until my cheeks are dry

To princesses and wedding veils
A little girl again
Just spin me round and round the room
Until my breath grows thin



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-08-14 07:09 AM


Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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2 posted 2007-08-16 12:17 PM




"Just spin me round and round the room
Until my breath grows thin"

sadly beautiful Tina

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3 posted 2007-08-16 02:44 AM


woah this is very nicely written. enjoyed this thorouhly.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-08-16 10:15 AM


My life was a fairytale (to me) for so many years...

nice writing

M

TinaTrivett
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5 posted 2007-08-16 03:59 PM


Thanks all...appreciate your kind words.
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