King Green Eyes - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #41

King Green Eyes

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-08-13 08:27 PM

.

Toward a dog that dared
To walk his street— my cat
Just flicked one ear

.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2007-08-14 03:13 AM

Love this. I can see that cat passing with it's haughty disdain ...
The flick of an ear, the lift of an eye, not bothering to hiss as he sauntered by. "late"

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-08-14 04:40 AM

This among my favorites

You captured the attitude with a simplicity a cat would disdain. Mine would think they deserve more words - but it's all a matter of personal taste and -- ego. I am loving this, John.

Alison

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-08-14 05:48 AM

Yes, just like the fat cats and the cool cats amongst humankind.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.