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aziza
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0 posted 2007-08-12 07:01 PM


Time with You


Touch me, please.  Touch me.
Slide your hands there, slowly up.  Like you do.
Like you touch me.  So good when you do.
It makes me want to beg for more
Please touch me there.  And …

Well, that wasn’t where I was thinking
But you make it work so well.

Dance with me, please.  Dance with me.
Your fingers tapping over my body as it sways.  Like it does.
Like you make me dance.  A slow dance to silent music.
I long to feel you dancing over me.
Please, dance again on my skin.  Please …

Dance with me.

Sing to me, please. Sing to me
Deep voice melding to my soft tune.  Like we do.
Like you strum an instrument.  Like you play me.
Feelings soar to a soprano's crescendo
Please, sing to me.  Again …

Sing your song.
Please.  As I plead for more.


Alison


© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2007-08-12 07:08 PM


beautiful just beautiful !!!
aziza
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2 posted 2007-08-12 07:12 PM


1slick_lady

Thank you so much

Alison

Rick
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3 posted 2007-08-12 07:22 PM


A very pleasing write Alison, very much enjoyed my friend, sensual and needing, brought many visions and many thoughts.

Rick

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4 posted 2007-08-12 07:27 PM


The dance can sometimes be the most wonderful thing can it not lady A??  Very much enjoyed you here.  
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-12 07:30 PM


Luscious like a walk in the forest...James
aziza
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6 posted 2007-08-12 10:44 PM


Rick

Thank you for reading and enjoying
Like you do.

I treasure your comments.

Alison

aziza
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7 posted 2007-08-12 10:46 PM


D

The dance sometimes is the height of my day.
Thank you for seeing it through my eyes.

A

aziza
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8 posted 2007-08-12 10:46 PM


James

Thank you for taking the walk with me

Alison

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-08-13 06:26 AM


ms az, a woman that speaks her wants
is a lovely woman indeed, enjoyed this

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with you
10 posted 2007-08-13 08:15 AM


"Like you make me dance.  A slow dance to silent music.
I long to feel you dancing over me."

heck yeah...

really liked this

Roysie
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11 posted 2007-08-13 09:16 AM


Reminds of a great old song by The Tubes. "At this moment of surrender darling, if you really care..don't touch me there."
Kahlil
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12 posted 2007-08-13 09:30 AM


soft and sensual...very nice
MoonShadow
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13 posted 2007-08-13 11:47 AM



   Aziza... Such sweet sensual pleas make it difficult if not impossible for a romantic to resist.

            MoonShadow
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aziza
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14 posted 2007-08-14 02:59 AM


Dark Stranger

You so often make me smile

Thank you
A

aziza
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15 posted 2007-08-14 03:00 AM


SEA

Thank you, dahlink.
I am loving that you love this
and I am loving that you read my poems.

You mean a lot to me.

A

aziza
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16 posted 2007-08-14 03:01 AM


Roysie

Thank you for reading, enjoying
and brining your thoughts here.

A

aziza
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17 posted 2007-08-14 03:03 AM


Kahlil

Thank you.
I am glad that you liked this one.
It's pretty special to me.

A

aziza
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18 posted 2007-08-14 03:05 AM


MoonShadow

Thank you.
Your comments touch me inside

A

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19 posted 2007-08-16 12:09 PM




"Please.  As I plead for more."

really sensual Alison
bears reading over

and I did
several times


aziza
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20 posted 2007-08-16 12:15 PM


Kate,

Thank you.
It's rather nice to know you are reading
when I am - silly, but it's a nice feeling.

Alison

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21 posted 2008-02-13 04:42 PM


I can not reread this without my eyes filling with tears and feel an outpouring of the tenderest feelings for you.
S poigniant, explicit and beautiful this is.
And I will keep it
J

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22 posted 2008-02-21 10:08 AM


Oh my!

What a lovely Post Alison!-- Thank you for the good read

ARCTIC WIND

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