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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2007-08-12 03:30 PM


Went to bed with a smile,
Laid awake while she slept all the while.
Woke up to a smile and a kiss,
On a high cloud of bliss.
Sat down and waited in the living room,
Feelings of something better begin to bloom.
Breakfast is soon brought out to eat,
Spicey breakfast burritos what a great treat!
Breakfast at Amber's is such a joy,
Escaping from the inside was a little boy.
So what are we doing this weekend?
How about breakfast at Amber's?

I am the little cracked mirror

© Copyright 2007 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
Posts 240

1 posted 2007-08-12 03:51 PM


Wonderful, seems there might be an angel in your little bit of Hell.  I understand because I've one in mine.
(Eggs served sunny side up?)

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2007-08-12 06:23 PM


I like this
and I want some of that breakfast burrito!

Thank you for sharing - you made me smile.

A

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-08-12 11:37 PM


The burritos sound good to me! Could I have breakfast at Amber's, too? ~ Nah, two's company and three's a crowd! lol

Sounds like you have found your own bit of heaven on Earth!

Hugs to you, Hot Stuff!
Linda

Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2007-08-14 06:34 PM


Who's Amber boyo?? Like the poem   didn't know you liked breakfast burritos tho
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2007-08-14 06:46 PM


sounds real, and very dreamy

hugs
Lee J.

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