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Somewhere In Rhyme
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Somewhere In Rhyme |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Somewhere In Rhyme ~*Marge Tindal*~ Somewhere in rhyme I have loved you in word-thoughts inked sublime Somewhere in time I have found you cavorting through my rhyme~ Somewhere in my memory I have found us just as we were back then Somewhere in time ... somewhere in rhyme that's just the way it always has been~ Stay with me now, darling, forever let us traipse through this life once more Somewhere in time ... somewhere in rhyme knowing there is much love in store~ Forever in time ... forever in rhyme thoughts of us etched in my heart Somewhere in time ... somewhere in my rhyme I stretch to reach the deepest part of the two of us together just as it was meant to be me loving you ... you loving me~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Love this one Marge |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ah,Marge ever the romantic. Lovely, "late" |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I could just see a smiling couple waltzing with movements as one, when I read this. Rae |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ooooooh! This is pretty! *hugs*....jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How beautiful, Marge! You are a wonderful poetess. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Romantic and lovely! Bet I know who you had in mind!! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your love rhyme sublime last 'til the end of time!  So lovely a penning!  EO |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge, This was so lovely, it touched me where I live, in my heart. Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem Huggs Kimberly |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*SIGH* this is so wonderful Marge  |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Marge... I love the time you spend in rhyme to take us through the miles. Leave none behind and oh sublime you give us all a smile. MoonShadow . |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As melodic, as the waltz itself. Lovely write. TD |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate so much to this , I have just written about , sharing time and reminiscing in rhyme Hope |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone ... I love it when my quill drops into that old romantic bottle of ink~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well done Marge...you also reminded me of the movie "Somewhere In Time"....Did I ever need a hankie alert with that one. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge, Beautiful words, well written. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Thank you ... guess what my all-time favorite movie is ?? Yep ... you got it !! Gemini~ Thank you ... it's nice to see you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Somewhere in my memory I have found us just as we were back then Oh, sweet lady... this is absolutely lovely!! |
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