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Jenna
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0 posted 2007-08-12 11:12 AM


Be patient as I learn to unravel you
don't hate me for my doubts and insecurities
give me time to trust
to allow myself to surrender to the power of you.
Know that I am waiting
judging
when to let my defences fall.
I'll take your hand when I am ready
will trust when I have faith
and wil fit beside you
in the place where I belong.
When you feel like giving up on me
remember
that when the walls come down
I will be your rock
will love you unconditionally
and will be your candle
when darkness falls.
Trust in destiny,
I will be there
just give me time

Be still.

[This message has been edited by Jenna (08-12-2007 12:57 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-08-12 01:27 PM


Jenna~
This is just lovely~
I really like the thought of
'will be your candle
when darkness falls.'


Soft and thoughtful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Roysie
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2 posted 2007-08-12 01:57 PM


Be still my beating heart. That's beautiful Jenna.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-08-12 06:09 PM


Enjoyed...James
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