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Open Poetry #41

The Thorn

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2007-08-12 10:23 AM

To write poetry so right and carefully, in delight,
So written is unbidden of any praise, but smitten
By unknown who alone rises discord by harsh tone.

Gloom

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2007-08-12 01:50 PM

poetry
can be
both thorn and rosebud
for they are not
mutually exclusive,
but rather form
a kind of symbiotic
relationship

enjoyed this pondering thorn

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-08-12 03:47 PM

I honestly think no one has the right to "judge" another's poetry. If someone is writing from their heart, about how they feel or what they know, then that is all that matters. If you don't like it don't reply. If you enjoyed it, say you did.