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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2007-08-12 07:23 AM



Come rain
to open branches
of storms
that stall
at the horizon

distant dreams
and lips
but for a fleeting
second
barely met

the fading kiss
amid
the heavy clouds
that strives
to come fullterm

but hasn't yet.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-12-2007 08:00 PM).]

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2007-08-12 07:41 AM


ms inky, your art is woman water, enjoyed it ms
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-08-12 11:09 AM


Aww! ~ The anticipation!

I thoroughly enjoy how you incorporate Mother Nature into your poetry, Dear Goddess!

Loving hug,

Linda

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2007-08-12 11:24 AM


Such thirst, to rise just shy of sate.
Grin...that thought just prompted me to take out my fan.

Lovely rendering Mich.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2007-08-12 12:46 PM


Nice anticipation!
Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2007-08-12 03:47 PM


enjoyed

I am the little cracked mirror

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2007-08-12 07:20 PM


This is just beautiful.

Alison

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