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Open Poetry #41

Five AM

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-08-11 06:40 AM

.

With a slender
Half circle
Glint of light

In a dark
Not yet
Dawn sky

The round moon
Blue on deeper blue . . .

Is to see and know
There are other
Perhaps even greater things
Than you or I

Though when combined
Two as one
At such an hour

We can hardly imagine
What they are

.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-08-11 08:06 AM

Enjoyed...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-08-11 12:18 PM

Superb!

[wonderful to read!]

serious applause!!

~

Hyaunt
Member

since 2007-07-12

Posts 74

3 posted 2007-08-11 01:45 PM

Ah, moon,
kindly go away

let a quiet day
stay
in his heart
in her mind
when love comes to prey

for no one
really wants
to be on it's tray
under your surway

So kindly
Ah, moon
go away

Most sentimental piece and very touching

wonderful read

Hyaunt

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

4 posted 2007-08-12 03:54 PM

Now this I can understand and enjoy

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-08-12 05:20 PM

John

You paint words with light strokes
that reach to my mind and share the picture.

And I smile.

Alison

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