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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-08-08 09:34 PM

Dreams of Love’s Perfection

While the fine-haloed moon
hangs like a multi-orbed taper
flaming in the gathering mist,
that seems to condense infinity
to a prisoner of the endless dark
and immense silence of the night,
it is only then that we believe
the sky may truly be listening
to our dreams of Love’s perfection,
as they try to pace the night wind
along the pathways of eternity!
© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
bel1e
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1 posted 2007-08-08 09:41 PM

lord man...your poems are so packed with colors and imagery...always so vividly succint~~~

~~~enjoyed this

  

Hyaunt
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2 posted 2007-08-08 09:49 PM

What a perfect poem here!
It sends electricity to my brain which sparks my thought.

A perfect beauty

Thank you for your telant writing!

Hyaunt
ArtSolstice
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3 posted 2007-08-08 09:50 PM

Oh, this is rather magical!

Especially fine:

           "gathering mist,
that seems to condense infinity
to a prisoner of the endless dark
and immense silence of the night,"

WOW !   and

"as they try to pace the wind
along the pathways of eternity!"
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-08-09 04:57 AM

"and it is only then that we believe
the sky may truly be listening"

~ Ah, yes, I have also experienced what you have so poetically expressed!

Love & Night Skies,

Linda
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-09 07:02 AM

A pleasure to read...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2007-08-09 01:33 PM

poet, you are
always
in pace
with those night winds
SEA
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with you
7 posted 2007-08-09 06:22 PM

"it is only then that we believe
the sky may truly be listening
to our dreams of Love’s perfection,"

soooo enjoyed this!!

gwaihir
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8 posted 2007-08-09 07:17 PM

"condense infinity" -- Great image.  
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2007-08-10 04:26 AM

flaming in the gathering mist,


I also love the moon, Bruce~~ and I have seen that flame

M
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