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BBGrrl
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0 posted 2007-08-08 04:45 PM


~ 1 ~

lady bathes alone
a curve of sweetened cream
adorned golden, curled.
parted lips betray hidden
scorned petals yearn, scent denied

wander wolf prowls
Ronin - insatiable
towers, silvered, spare
master in sinew, bone, in lust
eyes burn through thin skin veneer

honeyed growl purrs
parchment from behind the screen
her face, stained crimson


~ 2 ~

a thousand tiny bells ring
when she laughs - one dissonant
when she sings - a note
discontent, sobbing, throbbing
ear cocked for a wild breath

subtle seduction
proud shadow upon the screen
growls night music
tales of prowess, his great need
teeth and lolling tongue displayed

hypnotized by night
claws rake secret desire
her robe falls away


~ 3 ~

Ladyfly trembles
she has been aloft too long
her wanton flirting
caught in volcanic spume, falls
wings open, stretching, bejeweled

sure of prey - wise eyes
light from within, knowledge
branded on his frame
blood quickens, fills ready skin
‘ware now, Ronin’s sword unsheathed

tonguefire consumes
a wake of shredded paper
the divide traversed



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bel1e
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1 posted 2007-08-08 04:54 PM


very exciting read...
i like the predatory quickening....

much enjoyed you~

  

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2007-08-08 06:00 PM


ms bb, this is evolution entwining within itself, lovely work ms
BBGrrl
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3 posted 2007-08-08 06:39 PM


Thank you so much, babygirl, daark.

I am thinking the next set of installments will be behind closed doors.

gwaihir
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4 posted 2007-08-08 08:47 PM


Crazy hot stuff here BBG.  I wonder if the female protagonist should perhaps lock her door...or did she leave it open on purpose?      
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